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Good Words. by EveDaniels

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"Honestly...I'm a little scared," she admitted.

"Don't worry about it," he reassured her. "It's nothing to be afraid of."

"It's different for you; you've done all of this before. I-I haven't. It's my first time, so I have no idea what to do." She was so nervous that she was shaking, but at the same time her cheeks were flushed with excitement.

"Stop worrying, babe. Just follow my lead and you'll do fine."

When she looked at him, she could see it in his eyes. He was ready to go, but she was holding him back. She was still afraid, but he was worth it. If he was ready to go there, then so was she.

"Alright then," she took a deep breath in an attempt to calm down. "Let's go. I can do this."

A smile spread across his face when she spoke; he'd been afraid that she would back out.

"Great. Great!" He was full of energy now. Before she could even take her hat off, he had her by the hand and was leading her out the door and down the hall.

"You know, you're lucky I love you," she said in an out-of-breath voice as she struggled to keep up with him.

"Oh, I know. I'm very lucky. Just promise me one thing, babe," his eyes gleamed with a certain mischief. "Try not to scream too loud when I kill the old man."
...Random things inspire me when I'm bored and playing with the context of words is fun.
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smilewithlove Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i read this and was thoroughly thrilled by your twisting of language and mind games. it has been featured here [link]
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FillInTheBlankStares Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Student Writer
Yay, thank you! :D
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smilewithlove Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you're welcome :D
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Laeneris Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Writer
I really thought something else was going on. Shame on me. :ashamed: Great ending though, congrats on your DLD! :D
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FillInTheBlankStares Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Student Writer
Bahaha, that's the fun with words. I didn't want to give away what was going on too quickly. And thank you!!
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Laeneris Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome! :giggle:
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SourAir Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is epic. XD
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FillInTheBlankStares Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks! :D
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DailyLitDeviations in a news article that can be found here [link]
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FillInTheBlankStares Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Student Writer
:eager: Thank you so much!
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